DWC Unseen beauty Results

 

 

 

 

I finally decided to stop screwing around and finish the DWC.

 

So.

 

I decided to Mark out of Seven. As there was Seven contestants this episode.

I was going off of Seven items.

 

Patel Corp

Has no Fight scenes

No Extreme Human Interaction

Shows Beauty in dinosaurs

Has the Dinosaur you Selected, As that is your main point

Logic 

Grammar/Typos.

 

 

Don't take your Rating Too seriously, As I mark these Kinda Heartlessly, And with the rule of a Dictator

 

MUHAHAHAHAHAHA--

 

Someone let Hitler out of the Cupboard... Which one of you hooligans did it... ?

 

Update, I'm happy to announce Hitler is back in the Cupboard, And the Cupboard is not locked.

 

Done with the Doctor who References.

 

Ε... E is apparently a Specail character... Hmm.

 

(The order I have them in is not their placing but the order I received them in)

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Catzilla Score: 5.5

ANIMAL: Parasaurlophus 

 

You had a rather Interesting Story, I felt the Connection of Patel corp and Hammond was well used. You had very frequent Grammar mistakes, Which, Could easily have been fixed. Although I doubt the Parasaurs could Actually pick up the flowers and Cover one of there dead in it, It was a nice touch, and hit one of the key points of the story, .5 . Although some Connections I couldnt see... Overall it was a great story, In the Future I'd advise that you Read over your work to make sure there is no Typos or Grammar errors, As you lose points for that rather Easily. 

 

Good job! Keep it up, And one day you may be FBR Material. 

 

Carnosaurs Score: 6

ANIMAL: Pachycephalosaurus

Good job. I Really enjoyed your Story. It felt Rather Realistic. Although I would've enjoyed more time on Site B, But your story was excelent I enjoyed it. Your study behind the dinosaurs felt accurate, or you can pitch lies really well. 

 

Good job!

 

Mr.Happy9097 Score: 6

ANIMAL: T-Rex

You did a good job. As far a story goes, You had a good set up and Execution.. You didn't nessiceraly hit the point on the "Beauty" As, You did have some scenes that showed a Hint of beauty, But its not all just Mates and Nuzzling. 

 

Good job.

 

Silver_Falcon's Score: 6.7

ANIMAL: Triceratops

You clearly understood the challange, As you've shown a lot of Beauty in an Animal thats not really known for it. I was confused why your Trikes had Quills, As that would have to be a really big genetic mutation, So a .5 on logic, but your thinking and Research made sense. 

 

Good job.

 

Sci-fi king25 Score: 6

ANIMAL: Velociraptor 

 

Maybe not the best choice of Animal for something of beauty, Theres a lot of different ways this could've been handled. You did your best. I would've suggested an actual Nesting group, as it would've made for a more interesting story. Still good and entertaining none the less.

 

Good job.

 

Smaug The Magnificent Score: 5.5

ANIMAL: Mossasaur

(Couldn't find a Shilloutte Skeleton...)

 

You did a good job, You made it interesting, And Mossasaur is something we don't see too often.  You lost Points because although it pushing around the Kelp ball was Kinda touching, But, It did kill a lot of things. As that is their nature you would expect that, But we are trying to acheive something without Hunting in it. Good job. 

 

Dinosteve93 Score: 5.9 

ANIMAL: Ceratosaurus 

 

Your story was splended. Personally, I think you could've extended more. You met most criteria, including the beauty and logic. You did seem to have an excessive amount of human interaction with it though..

 

Its a good start.

 

 

 

I'd like to thank you all for entering, And a tip of my hat to the first time enterers, as this is no easy feet to do. Good job all.

 

I know I promised A d-rex Bit, But I managed to Bruise my hand and it hurts like a mother trucker... So.

 

Instead I'll announce our next challange

 

 

"Write a dinosaur creepypasta" Submitted by Raptor-401

 

Write the creepiest story revolving around... maybe D-rex... Not sure, I'll have it worked out by the next DWC....

 

Again, Congrats and better luck next time to all. 

 

Good job!

 

-Paden